Item: Booty Call
Language: en-US
Type of Problem: Incorrect_content
Extra Details: A dash in the overview is written as two hyphens. TMDb uses Unicode, so can use the actual character for a dash; in US English this is an em dash (—) with no spaces on either side. The relevant part of the text should, therefore, be "… make it a double—bringing along …".
When part of a sentence that adds extra detail is broken off from the rest of the sentence by commas, there needs to be commas on both sides, not only one side. So it should be "… bringing along her brash friend, Lysterine, whom …" because the name "Lysterine" is extra detail that is not grammatically essential to the sentence. The name "Bunz" later in the sentence is already separated off in this way, so it would be best to be consistent.
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